A Moment Between

"Convergence" photography by Adam Romanowicz

A Moment Between

Freshly picked
destinies emerge
unfolding,
glancing at
past momentarily; then
future breaks fertile.

Submitting for One Shoot Sunday at one stop poetry.


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8 Responses to A Moment Between

  1. Reflections says:

    The elusive moment, between yet always in the midst. Great piece.

  2. dustus says:

    Great use of time element and Shadorma form. A backward glance amid present into a promising future. Well penned.

  3. brian says:

    nice…destinies breaking free into future, letting go of the past…that is a nice thought indeed…

  4. Monika says:

    Very thoughtful. Loved your style.

  5. Elisa's Spot says:

    Your words have me waiting for the surface to finish opening(much umbrella-like) and to watch the drops flicked free and clean!

  6. Glynn says:

    Great poem. That moment of what was and what will be – excellent interpretation.

  7. leah says:

    Lovely, That you can write something with little words. #like

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