Forever Spring

Forever spring, I
fall for him in all seasons;
his love kills winter.

***

(I offer this haiku for Open Link Night #11 at dVerse Poets Pub)
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13 Responses to Forever Spring

  1. Simple, complex, tight, embracing. Wonderful!

  2. hedgewitch says:

    Very short and equally sweet.

  3. brian says:

    smiles…this is beautiful and uplifting…love seeing love forever bloom…smiles.

  4. claudia says:

    his love surely does….and brings so much new life…beautiful anna

  5. Adura Ojo says:

    Love it. This is my kind of poem. Say so much in just a few words. Thank you for your sweet offering.

  6. wolfsrosebud says:

    I want one of those… as we are slowly approaching winter. I know what you mean.

  7. tashtoo says:

    This speaks volumes! A wonderful write presented in a favorite form…well done!

  8. Three out of four seasons in one tiny poem! But what of the heat of summer?!?

    The word choice of “his love kills winter” intrigued me, too. A very personal global warming? A wood stove to warm yourself by? The AntiJackFrost?

    So much packed into this abbreviated piece. Certainly sparked associations for me. Thanks!

  9. Steve King says:

    What an inspired distillation!

  10. Oh, this is an excellent haiku! Love it 🙂

  11. Ain’t nothin’ like spring, that’s for sure!!

    Lovely words.

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