"Convergence" photography by Adam Romanowicz
A Moment Between
Freshly picked
destinies emerge
unfolding,
glancing at
past momentarily; then
future breaks fertile.
–
Submitting for One Shoot Sunday at one stop poetry.
A Moment Between
"Convergence" photography by Adam Romanowicz
A Moment Between
Freshly picked
destinies emerge
unfolding,
glancing at
past momentarily; then
future breaks fertile.
–
wayside word garden 
The elusive moment, between yet always in the midst. Great piece.
Great use of time element and Shadorma form. A backward glance amid present into a promising future. Well penned.
nice…destinies breaking free into future, letting go of the past…that is a nice thought indeed…
The fertile future. Great pov set up masterfully. Love it.
http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/el-amor-nuevo-dia.html
Very thoughtful. Loved your style.
Your words have me waiting for the surface to finish opening(much umbrella-like) and to watch the drops flicked free and clean!
Great poem. That moment of what was and what will be – excellent interpretation.
Lovely, That you can write something with little words. #like